To test benefit statements the marketing method is to say
"so what". Only when the writer satisfies the "so what test" can the writer
claim a benefit.
The statements below are taken verbatim from past
resumes. Past tense and present tense are retained in original form as many
people were still employed when the resume was written. Further, statements
will vary depending on the level of the jobseekers responsibility and
experience. An executive's statements will be stronger and more
sophisticated. A blue collar worker's statements will be different
again. This is just a guide.
Computer skills - Excel and MYOB
·
Use excel spreadsheets and MYOB accounting
package to organise account and job orders, to save time and increase
productivity.
·
Extensive use of Excel spreadsheets
for opening and maintaining customer profiles. No benefit statement
needed - as the emphasis is on using Excel.
·
Apply merchandising skills to constantly
review and change displays to maximise impulse buying and increase profits.
Performance Appraisals
·
Implemented KPI indicators and conducted performance appraisals
in order to measure performance and identify areas of staff development,
training and discipline.
Note: Here you could have the final benefit or measurable outcome, but
most companies do not follow up and measure these type of changes.
Once again if you want to advance in your career you could put something in
place yourself to give these figures.
See if you can recognise
a feature and benefit.
Prepared rosters
·
Reduced
the wages budget by $120,000 in 2005 by restructuring rosters
to coincide with
high demand periods.
Repaired and
maintained mining equipment
·
Repaired, overhauled and serviced a range of mobile and stationary
and heavy industrial mining plant and equipment to ensure proper
performance and safety
to meet company standards.
Attended meetings
·
Contributed to
weekly management meetings, and verbally presented
forecasting sheets to the duty managers, in order to assist them to make
decisions on staffing levels and general catering preparation.
Health and
Safety
·
Supervised the storage of
equipment to ensure occupational health and
safety principles were
adhered to in order to reduce risk (and save the
company
money on compensation payments).
Accounts
·
Maintained both accounts payable and
receivable ensuring all accounts paid within suppliers terms and conditions
to avoid excess fees for late payment.
Stocktaking
·
Implemented
stock control for 70 departments, sourcing new product lines to replace low
profit generating items resulting in faster turnover of stock - directly
contributing to higher sales and profit margin by 24%.
Assist the Store Manager in the
office (Present tense)
·
Calculate and prepare monthly and seasonal
accruals for the store manager for purchases between $65,000 to $100,000
each month with 100% accuracy.
Performed the full range of library duties
·
Successfully applied for funding to connect
the library computers to the Internet and to purchase new computers to support
the new technology.
Liaison with other departments
·
Relationship
building with other relevant company personnel for
communication of
competitor activity, credit, inventory management and
market intelligence.
The next step is to incorporate
these marketing techniques into your sales letters
Overview -
Outline of a Job Application Letter
How to write and set out a job
application letter.
Plan your
letter. Begin outlining your
letter with the end in mind.
The most important step in writing
letters is in the planning. Know what you want to accomplish and keep this
in mind. Your goal will be different for each type of letter. It
was stated earlier that each method will require you
to communicate verbally and in writing to using vastly
different job applications.
So you need to be clear on:-
Go through this exercise on paper and ensure it
answers all these questions.
Research
Before
you can write your dynamic letter you must research the company so that you
can clearly see how you can write your job application to meet their
needs and value add to their company. Often you can find information to
demonstrate to the employer that you have other skills that may suit the
position based on what you have read about the company.
See
example
letter setting out how you can plan your letter
for an advertised position.
Any formal business letter,
whether it is in marketing or job search, has a beginning, a middle
and an end
The
beginning
Begin with the end in mind. What is your goal?
This is the attention paragraph. The beginning of the letter is used to state the
position you are applying for (if advertised) and is reserved for the
impact statement - the opening statement or headline sentence. In
a cold calling or networking letter it will include a reference to the
person who introduced you to the reader, or the reason why you are writing.
The middle
In marketing, this is the "interest" section. This section is used to address the employers needs and
demonstrate that the applicant has all the criteria the employer requires.
Don't be put off if you haven't got all the criteria. (See further on). Personal attributes
play a big part in the selection process.
The middle can be up to three short paragraphs or
preferably, about 5 bullet points. The length depends on how many criteria
the employer requests. Spend a lot of time making this information short and
precise.
Applicants can also give any other experience, knowledge or skill relevant to the job that has not been advertised.
This is called "value adding".
Cold calling and
networking letters must demonstrate how they can contribute to the organisation
and this can only be determined after researching the company.
The end
In marketing terms, the
end is the
desire statement. Through your sales methods you now want to close the sale.
To do this you, the applicant, should have built up sufficient interest so
that the buyer (the employer) will want to meet you
to (the desire) to see if you are what the company needs, and ultimately will make a job
offer.
Note:
In job search the goal is to get an interview so the applicant
still needs to ask for an
interview or a chance to meet face to face.
Go to Resume Cover Letter - for more information on the beginning the middle and the end.
A cover letter for an advertised position
Do not
be put off if you do not has 100% of the criteria. Providing you
meet at the very least 65% of the criteria and are prepared to learn
the skills they require, have a go. Attributes and references
can often influence the employer. Further, knowing about the company
and being able to relate to these skills you do not have will assist
you to address them in the letter. You will see how they fit into
your job and you may have done something that requires the same type
of processes or knowledge.
Analyse
what you have. Can any of this combined information be summed up
into an
opening statement
(see below) Your benefit statement is probably in your resume if it is
outcome based. As stated earlier, the middle of the road jobs may
find this task a bit more difficult. Work with what you have.
In order to
produce a winning cover letter that will land you your dream job,
you need to read all 5 sections on letter writing.
In addition to this section, these are:-
Recommended Resources
As stated,
there are many
resources you can use that show you how to write effectively. This skill
will not be wasted and may be considered as professional development. A
resource you may like to own is
Amazing Cover
Letters Creator. If you are
writing a lot of letters this resource will suit you. Jimmy assures me
that letters must be customised and can be stored into a template as a lot of
the information is generic.
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